I enjoyed your poem. Although the rhythm seemed to become a little disjointed I felt this contributed to the theme of the poem well.

"cant" should be "can't".

Very good poem. I like the mixed flow to it - how it follows a very sporadic pattern of rhyming. :)

Well written poem Chris. A wonderful and inspirational write. Looking through someone else's eyes and seeing things from their persepective is one of the hardest things for people. There are so many closed minded people out there, and they really need to just open their eyes and accept the light. Well done my friend. Keep on writing and God Bless.