Awww.. that was really sad.. it flowed well, used good descriptions and contained a lot of emotion. nice job! keep it up! 5/5

Awwwww that is soooo sad!!!!
and i love ur poems sooo much, they are so trueful and fullfilling you dont need to do anything more for your poems are sooo meaningful and supportive and they capture the feelings so well. And it is good because u can write and some people cant write and then they think they are good... but meh im going of line now lol but yes I will add u on msn soon okay, not yet though cause im busy lol, is that ok?
but yeh I dont understand why some people do these kind of things exspecially when they are so loved and exspecially when it is u who love them..... they dont seem to think about that do they?
alwell, well this is my new name
'And there was light' but my name before was fire, u no who i am i hope lol
well i love yah poems,
maybe u could comment some of mine again aswell, thanks so much if u do and lol wow!
u have so many peoms.... i wish i could be as good as u...
=(
well ttyl good luck
=D love light xxx