Great poem! I love it-very well written,,,It must be really hard to write a poem like that! Amazing job---5/5 You should write some more of these kinds of poems---

Wonderful use of the alphabet.
Perhaps it didn't make ABSOLUTE sense in some parts, but you can hardly be blamed.
Great work! I mean it.
Heheh, I was wondering how you would get past X and Z...

//T.L.//

"Kissing you is what feels my heart"
-Fills* might sound a little better and more grammatically correct.

Other than that, the poem was flawless. You did a great job on this acrostic poem. None of the lines seemed forced and that is very hard to do, especially with an acrostic poem. Good job, hun. You are so talented!! Keep up the wonderful work :) 5/5 and nothing less!!

~BJ~

Was beautiful
espeacially for your first of this kind.
I like your words they have meaning, and your not afraid to show it.
But you dont make it bland and boring you have 'The Gift'
~Emah
5/5

Beautiful writing. I was a little dubious about it following the alphabet but you pulled it off flawlessly. I was impressed with the X and Z lines as they flowed well annd weren't forced.
Using this acrostic form adds a new dimension to a wonderful poem.

I personally think it might work better with some sort of consistent rhyming scheme. it's very cute but kind of hard to read. there doesn't seem to be any consistent tempo or anything.

=D

Good job. I have ONE question: Was it hard to find something for X and Z? Hahaz. You did a great job. I have been wanting to try an ABC poem but I haven't got to it yet. Keep it up.

>black&&blue

Another effective style. simple. creative. perfect.

-biscuit-