So Lost without You

by EdgeofCrimson   Jul 19, 2006


Her soft, warm embrace
turns into a cold, sad stare
echoes of your voice
tearing slowly and painfully
what was once a diffucult path
turned into a bottomless pit
sleeping without dreams
crying without tears
constant exposure, to a future uncertain
there may be no future
the present frozen in place
the past, soon forgotten.

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  • 18 years ago

    by LonelyNightsHurt

    Its an awesome free verse.. I really liked it..
    I loved the last quote you've added, thought it was amazing..
    XxX
    LoNeLY. . .

  • 18 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    I really like urs too! are u rlly 21?

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    What was once a diffucult path
    turned into a bottomless pit
    sleeping without dreams
    crying without tears
    [I liked those lines alot. I thought they were great!]

    It was a sad poem. But good. I thought you could make it a little longer, but I like it the way it is now. Keep it up. =) 5/5

    Natalie``

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