This is an alright poem but you later ones are much better then this one lol but i liked the turn of events in it about waiting for this person to call but then it turns out there was no person that was going to call, i though that was good because if you think about it then there is different meanings you can have from it lol well good job and thanks for this long comment

keenan

Ugh. i hate waiting & do it all the time. people never call when theyre supossed to & it kills me.