Burned Alive

by Samantha   Jul 20, 2006


I hate my life
Dont you forget

I paid for you
Dont you regret

Hatful words, running eyes
All alone in a room of lies

Pulls out razor, digs in skin
Blood pours out another sin

More scars and lies
More hate to trace

Im burned alive
In a hateful place

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  • 17 years ago

    by argueing with the rain

    I like how you took your own creative license on this. dont listen to people when they say that its not good b/c it dosnt fit their own rules of writing. be different.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lucifer

    Very powerfully emotional poem samantha keep the great work up 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    Pretty good but you might want to make it into four stanzas and 4 lines in each one just a thought but its not too bad

    Laura

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