Sad,
Hurt,
Pain,
Things we've been through
but you still stood strong
and thats the key

5/5
~MF~

MF is right I ask myself this questions also and all your lines are truly right
why we live this world even though to a very little reason we should live for it even we live in vein just always think there are many child who didnt give lives enjoy it in whatever way just be true to your self think a possitive way
your a great poet and i love what you write
and ill give 5 for this poiece that youve done..

Geneross

Excellent, Tina!
this really flowed and i like the way you ended it:
"Reasons to hold on
Even if it is just in vain"
5/5!
your poems are awesome!!!

btw, thanx for the comments!

Great poem! And as they say, if you can think of one person that'll miss you when your gone then thats reason enough to carry on living!

You know what I know what youre feeling and i know you feel like s*#t but just keep your head up high alright. Trust noone but yourself and just remember that at the end of every tunnel theres light so dont give up hope. S*#t happens in life but even though life is a b*#ch you just have to suck it up and smile. youre a great poem writer!

Painful poem and unique too

you are a talent poem so keep writting