by Ms Joanna Dark Jul 20, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
You could always make me smile |
by Steven
I really liked this....i love this part "You could always make me smile |
by Natalie
WOw. That was really good. Usually I pick my fav parts but I can't do that with this poem, I like it all equally and quite alot. I thought your flow and rhyming were pretty good too. Keep it up! 5/5 |