WOw. That was really good. Usually I pick my fav parts but I can't do that with this poem, I like it all equally and quite alot. I thought your flow and rhyming were pretty good too. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

I really liked this....i love this part "You could always make me smile
When I had tears in my eyes
But how can I smile now
When we're saying goodbyes" so good....im going through this right now only its a sweet goodbye.....no broken pomises or nothing hurtful....she just has to go.....well done