Wow.. that is really good, and it is very true, because every day some one is beat, either if its physically or mentally, and it hurts.. so hang in there, eventually everyone figures how to beat defreat in their own way. no problem with commenting your work, i really do love it, and its hard to believe that you just started, you have such a flair for writing. keep it up! 5/5 from me and ill be reading all your stuff.. if thats fine with you, its all great and write on~

StuckInACloudOfMisery

This is the truth

Yah i beleive that! i truly appreaciate all your poem and honestly i was enjoyed they are all great keep on writing coz i keep on writing your poems god bless 5/5