Diminished Hope

by Wings Of Flames   Jul 20, 2006


Planet blue a perfect shell,
With the energy to evolve,
Precious life and beauty,
But many questions left to solve,

Flesh, skin and bloody veins,
Desires of mankind,
Emotion pulls our every string,
Hearts attracted to the bind,

Although we feel the slightest touch,
And cry to every star,
How are we yet so vulnerable?
Of our dying planet's scar,

Blame is put upon ourselves,
Although we shalln't care,
Death of our only home,
But nothing to compare.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    Other than the contraction "shalln't", I love the poem. The contraction really bugs me but that's just me. GREAT job on the poem and the message it portrays, though.

  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Great poem. Well worded and dripping with atmosphere.

  • 18 years ago

    by sчиτнєτι¢__x.

    Again, this was amazing. Absolutly{sp?} loved it. Excellent choice of wording, great flow. Not a thing that I'd think needs changing. Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Very nicely done moo moo, very nicely done : D
    love ya always! - Snoo

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