Very nicely done moo moo, very nicely done : D
love ya always! - Snoo

Again, this was amazing. Absolutly{sp?} loved it. Excellent choice of wording, great flow. Not a thing that I'd think needs changing. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Great poem. Well worded and dripping with atmosphere.

Other than the contraction "shalln't", I love the poem. The contraction really bugs me but that's just me. GREAT job on the poem and the message it portrays, though.