Dear Reader

by Wings Of Flames   Jul 20, 2006


Shall you care about a life?
Give it warmth and no disgrace,
Will you nourish ever moment?
And trim it's blackened lace?

Has the time come for a new?
With breaks there is a scream,
The heat is on yet it's so cold,
Nothing as it seams,

A stranger telling me,
'Gold has a time to rust,
There is no time to forgive,
With the stakes of breaking trust.'

I had no knowledge of wisdom,
Or it's steady form,
But today I learnt more lessons,
Then I have ever seen perform,

But alas I cannot disperse,
The crazed mind I keep in locks,
I cannot tell you anything,
For your time is in the clocks.

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  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    Good language, i felt the rhyming took away from the poem but never-the-less had some good qualities.

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    Should "ever" in the third line be "every"?

    "Nothing as it seams" should be "seems" unless you're talking about the seam of like, clothing. :)

    Another one... "Then I have ever seen perform"... then should be than and I would suggest performed instead of just perform. But that's just a personal opinion.

    I really like it, though. Especially the last stanza. You have a great way with words.

  • 18 years ago

    by sчиτнєτι¢__x.

    Very good poem. The rhyming didn't seem forced at all. And I really did like the ending to it. It was wonderful. Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    I wrote a poem called dear raeder too. lol, but i dislike mine. it was one of thsoe poems u write coz u havn't written oen in ages. oh well. lol. your's rocked. i love dit.
    always here emma!! -Snoo

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