I wrote a poem called dear raeder too. lol, but i dislike mine. it was one of thsoe poems u write coz u havn't written oen in ages. oh well. lol. your's rocked. i love dit.
always here emma!! -Snoo

Very good poem. The rhyming didn't seem forced at all. And I really did like the ending to it. It was wonderful. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Should "ever" in the third line be "every"?

"Nothing as it seams" should be "seems" unless you're talking about the seam of like, clothing. :)

Another one... "Then I have ever seen perform"... then should be than and I would suggest performed instead of just perform. But that's just a personal opinion.

I really like it, though. Especially the last stanza. You have a great way with words.

Good language, i felt the rhyming took away from the poem but never-the-less had some good qualities.