WOW this is AMAZING I am lost for words it is a 5/5 all the way the best by far love it

*GASP*
man this is sooooo gd trust me it really is your best one! i loved it soo much
I cant describe how gd it is!
BRILLIANT piece of work...5/5

I agree this is you master piece I cant say anything but just AWESOME Truly great written your too far from lol every lines tells something a lot of feeling and no loose strings this is 5 for me or 99999 lol you are a great writter just keep it up

"The shadow of a lost love has passed
Tears and pain are falling fast"

I loved this stanza. I found this poem a bit difficult to read, i think the rhymes were too close together, so everything seemed crowded, and every line was almost the same length, maybe if you tried different numbers of syllables, it would make it more interesting to read. Other than that, i did find your rhymes interesting and creative.

--Steph

This was stunning! So sad though.

It had a great flow and the rhyming was great. There's not a thing in this one that should be changed at all. Beautiful write. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Wonderfully powerfull words. I loved the death imagery. To me some rhymes seemed a little forced but that is a minor.
Excellent work.

OMG!!!i never read a better poem than this one...this poem is so beautiful,,i lost words...it's awsome...keep up the great work

Woah wicked good!

This is honestly one of the best poems i have ever read! i love this poem! and i can sadly say i can relate to it! its not a very good feeling to endure!
Very very well written, keep up the amazing work!
Love Paige....
Please read and comment on a few or more of my poems! and ill be more then glad to do the same!
xoxo

Very Very GOOD! I love how I could feel what you were feeling as you wrote!

Wow i havent read any of your other poems, but after this i would definatly love to, this is a very heart felt poem and you put each emotion in precisly, whether it be love or sadness, realy well written, keep it up.. check out some of my poems.... Kirsty xxx

Wowo Truely amazing. I have felt that before. You have an extrodinary talent! 5/5 Loretta

I feel wat you sayin.... ive been through it

Hi, love the poem! good work

I think this is a very good poem. It brings all these feelings back for my ex that I thought were gone. Oh welcome back.
Pamela :)