by Macabre Jul 20, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Intro Visual- A man in a coal black suit, walks up and puts a can of ashes down before a tree, he begins to speak- |
by Tammi
Wow great poem love it but a few suggestions for u on the 2.3.7.12 lines take out the word butt and the second verse the 4 line also the the 3 line from the bottom change bed to be I think it will help ok other thn that this is great 5/5 |