This was great I loved it the flow was perfect
5/5 keep writing its great

God Bless

_Chris

I loved this it was great, and i can really relate to this tons! i know that feeling i think a lot of girls do sometimes its great other times its not but either way this poem was wonderful! great job

I liked this poem. It was very emotional and I can relate very much. The flow was nice and the rhymes didn't seem too forced. You did a very good job conveying your message. Good job. My favorite stanza was:

"Everything went wrong
as everything will
but I was in love with you then
and I'm loving you still"

Keep writing!!

~BJ~

This poem has so much emotion in it! I love the rhyme and the flow is flawless---My favorite stanza is:

''Everything went wrong
as everything will
but I was in love with you then
and I'm loving you still''

^^It sums up the poem well---

Great write 5/5 Keep it up-

Pretty simple shprtish poem, thought you did get to the point. I thought you could have gone a little deeper though with your feelings. As I was reading it, the rhymes and what not were great, but I couldn't really feel the emotions, if that makes sense? Anywho, Keep it up and thanks for your comments.

Natalie``

I thought this was really sweet. It flowed well and for someone who hates rhyming it does well lol.
I like the whimsical quality the lack of emotion conveyed which is perfect for a memory. Good write

The last two lines are great. I can really relate to this poem, and it made me feel warmer inside. Very well written, great use of rhyme, excellent poem.

Peace. [Sole]

That was a very sweet write. You actually managed to write a "missing you" love poem of sorts with out it being cliche, at all. It's a mature (and better) version of the many posted on here. I'm assuming that's also why it's in the life category.
Sometimes no matter how much you want something and how hard you try everything else eg work, family etc makes it very difficult. I liked the simplicity in which you wrote it too, just saying the facts and not sugar coating anything.
Thanks for sharing, this was actually one of the best writes I've read in a while.

Nice rhymes. Good flow.
Indeed some fond memories. I have a couple of those with a few of my friends. Things that we will always remember and things we try to forget. Good job on this poem.

VERY nicely done. I really enjoyed reading it, there's not much to say. It was a great read. Excellent job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Sweet.
A very sad poem...but still sweet.
5/5
~Emah

I did love this one alot, it was reallky good, sweet and nice
keep it up my friend
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I should know exactly what you mean

I loved it i could realate to it keep it up :):)

please comment on my poems i like to have feedback thanx xxx alex xxx

I really like your poem! i have been reading a lot of these on this web site for a couple hours now and this is the only one i have rated a 5 so far. :):)

Very sweet poem and very touching.