by RockPixie Jul 20, 2006
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Rock n Roll. |
Really good up unitl the f bomb is dropped then its good again, i think if you cut the f-ing emo line it'd be a lot stronger, because over all its a VERY good poem and a great idea, but that line ruined it a bit for me, but overall good work! xo |