That was really touching, and it was a great poem, i feel like that alot of the time, and if you ever need someone to talk to you can talk to me. luv sarah x0x |
by hayley
Awesome! it really is. if ya need 2talk, im here....im only 13, but ive been thru cutting and suicide and all tht. so give me a shout! |
by amanda
Hey girl. . this poem touched me, i know what its liek to feel like that and as hayley commented ive been through it all aswell, alot of people have to dont feel alone. .if you eva need to talk my msn is xxmiss_cheekyxx@hotmail.com just add me im always up for a chat. . mwah xxx |
by Darien
Well done, a brilliant end to a great series of poems. There is something I need to suggest. Put these poems into a stanza, like a verse. It makes it so much easier for the reader to read. Also, get them editted. I'm too busy to do each poem right now, so maybe another time. Great effort, and they came out great. There were a few problems with some of them poems, but overall it was a great job. |
Wow that was AMAZING! i read all 6 parts! wow...this had so much emotion...so much...wow-ness! i'm speechless! 5/5 |