I'm sorry i never read you're poem before, but truth be told, i haven't been in a reading mood lately. i'm sorry, but if it makes you feel better the poem was really good. my favorites stanza was the third one, and i also love the ryhme it it aswell 'horizon' and 'wisen', rather cleverly done...well, i think so.
love you loads

Brad

I really loved this poem, it reminds me of a place I know. thank you for sharing.

Wow really enjoyed reading this poem i specially liked the bit...

Disappear into the sunset,
Become a dot on the horizon,
Find a place where I can grow,
where my spirit and soul can wisen,

The last line is so beautiful :) love it xx