by Nelle Jul 20, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
love is
( I have never wrote a poem like this, either..So honest opinions would be great, and People the numbers are simply here to tell you how many times he did/said those things, so don't get confused ) |
by Biscuit
A simple idea that works really well, very effective i like it |
What a original poem. I loved the use of numbers it was really creative. The whole thing is really cute and sweet. |
by Bridgette
This is very good.. I loved it. I love the way that you did it, it was very unique and creative. I've never read a poem done that way before. It's a very sweet poem, and I just loved it. I really like the way that you ended it. It seemed to fit perfectly. Great job on this! 5/5 Keep it up! |
by Sole
Great concept. That was really well written, it would probably work better if you kept it at either hryming/non-rhyming rater than to chop and change between the two. Brilliantly penned. |
by Goran Rahim
Honestly it is a really great poem, you did it so great |