WOW! that was amazing, it was short but full of a lot of emotions..I can say I have never read anything like that before! it was different, and unique..You wrote it beautifully!

Your poetry makes me laugh and it makes me happy. =D I hope you don't look at mine; Most of mine are sad, and, yeah. Well anyways. Excellent job. I am adding you to my favorites.

>black&&blue

Very cute. Reads almost like a nursery rhyme or something like that.

No big complaints. Just seems kind of short and.. youthful?

Awesome poem! Short, simple, and straight to the point type poem.

I thought it was funny when you said you want to pickle Percy and put him in a jar! A cute write here, thanks for sharing.

Lol
I like this poem,
its comical.
flows well,
and says much more..
Short and sweet :D 5/5

Lol. Quite humerous (sp). I loved it yet again! Good wording...and this Percy fellow. Sounds cute. Lol. ;) Looking forward to some more! xoxo

Samantha

Is Percy a person or a thing? I don't know but you used some good rhymes to keep it interesting.

Haha. That cute. Really flows well. I enjoyed it quite abit.