Children (Acrostic)

I love Acrostics!! This one definatly caught my eye..I love writing them and seems as if you did too!...Friends are the greatest aren't they?
I really liked "Precious little dumpling" I just thought it was a cute nicakname and got me to smile :-) Wonderful write!
-Krissey

OMG, I love kidspoems. It gives me a glimps into the world of little children. IT is so amazing how to see them grow up and change so much.
Anyway, I really loved this poem. Very well written!!
One note: does it has to be elegant doll??

I liked this, even though it's quite short, and I usually don't like acrostics xD. I am guessing the people you are talking about are friends, and they mean a lot to you. Keep it up! xxoo

sammycakes

Aw wow. This was beautiful. Great wording in this also! ..such short pieces, yet so good. This was great. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Beautiful poem. I especially enjoyed the first stanza, however the first 2 lines rhyme. This makes the reader expect rhymes later on, and it throws the rhythm off slightly. Still, great poem.