Awww. This made me think of these 3 kids I babysit. Two of them are twins and they are going to be 4 pretty soon (November 23). One is a boy (Travis) and the other one is a girl (Trisha). The other little kid, his name is Trevor. He is 6 (his birthday was on July 4th.) They are a bundle of joy. I love them to death. :) This poem reminded me of them.

Great job. Sorry I left you such a long comment on 3 kids that you don't even know. :) I just thought I would share. :)

>black&&blue

Typo in the word "elegant" in the second stanza.

I love how descriptive this is, especially the lines "King of monkeys/Energy knows no bounds". It's so true, and a great word play to describe it. :)

I love acrostics.. well reading them!
I just don't write them that well.
Haha, I liked this one.

What a delightful little write. I know acrostics can be tricky to write with the boundaries of the first letter, but I think you pulled it off.
You have a typo on the last line of the second stanza, I think you meant "Elegant."
Thanks for sharing Chyna sounds like a little darling.

I have never been able to write an acrostic and get it to flow smoothly and mean something,
and you have just done this...
lol
It reminds me of a few of my neices
lol

They are a handful

This started well but lost some of its lustre towards the end, i feel u could have done a bit more with the rhyming

-biscuit-

Beautiful poem. I especially enjoyed the first stanza, however the first 2 lines rhyme. This makes the reader expect rhymes later on, and it throws the rhythm off slightly. Still, great poem.

Aw wow. This was beautiful. Great wording in this also! ..such short pieces, yet so good. This was great. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

I liked this, even though it's quite short, and I usually don't like acrostics xD. I am guessing the people you are talking about are friends, and they mean a lot to you. Keep it up! xxoo

sammycakes

OMG, I love kidspoems. It gives me a glimps into the world of little children. IT is so amazing how to see them grow up and change so much.
Anyway, I really loved this poem. Very well written!!
One note: does it has to be elegant doll??

I love Acrostics!! This one definatly caught my eye..I love writing them and seems as if you did too!...Friends are the greatest aren't they?
I really liked "Precious little dumpling" I just thought it was a cute nicakname and got me to smile :-) Wonderful write!
-Krissey