Somber Walk (Ottava Rima)

by LadyPearl   Jul 20, 2006


Shadows tracing trees of bloody leaves
Engulfing the Bright moon in brilliant red
Dripping gold from bags of thieves
Watching as bound young witnesses bled
To the night goddess their cry decieves
Who still lives and who will be dead
Oracles crumbled, shimmered and shattered
Pieces of evidence soaring and scattered

Past massacres and abandoned dread
Past serene castles where flowers bloomed
But traces of vain courting still shred
Any other joyful emotion that loomed
To darkness it's blissful smile is fed
It's old memories and future consumed
Till nothing but seeds hid in the ground
Afraid of thirsty demons coming around

Here lies photos revealing inner pain
Gathered from walks near and afar
Every glimmer of hope has been slain
Destroyed by the Idea of who we are
Cast into fire of this forbidding ordain
Burning tints of emotions raw
Mercy shows no pity on these days
Tangled together in decaying dismay

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Another favourite and another 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    How true your words are.
    never will I get tired of reading this over and over again.

  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    I enjoyed reading this poem! i try to write an Ottava Rima poem but it didnt work, but yours is soo good! i like it

    5/5 keep it up

    Thanks for the comment on my poem it means alot to me!

  • 18 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    Wonderfull rich imagery. Perfect flow and word choice. You have a great descriptive talent. Keep it up 5/5

  • Wonderful Ottava Rima. You worded this piece wonderfully. Very strong. Keep up the great work! 5/5

    Natalie``