by Chris Jul 20, 2006
category :
Life, society /
about society
Give me some questions I\'ll turn them back into sections |
Seemed like a rap.....you should explain before or after the poem or whatever what exactly it is like a rap or song or whatever. I liked it none the less. |
Great poem chris! i liked how the first 4 stanzas rhymed and flowed with eachother and then when u got to the poin int he last stanza it broke the chain and made the message a lot clearer! great job! |