Great poem chris! i liked how the first 4 stanzas rhymed and flowed with eachother and then when u got to the poin int he last stanza it broke the chain and made the message a lot clearer! great job!

Seemed like a rap.....you should explain before or after the poem or whatever what exactly it is like a rap or song or whatever. I liked it none the less.

~~Retniapdoolb