Waves

by Sarah   Jul 20, 2006


Waves so big, come crashing down.
Waves contain, Pain all around.
Some days, calm before the storm
Much sorrow has become the norm

Water bears a different connotation
Bearer of this desperation
Drift silently in the murky expanse
undetected from a looking glance

Free, only to be re-confined
Amongst nature, intertwined
Far from that massive pond
Forever it cut our bond

Waves so big, cascading down
My heart no longer makes a sound
Ups and Downs, keeps one guessing
Expressing, stressing & repressing

This damage, Ironic to relate
To what was your untimely fate
Water holds so much more
then his body on the ocean floor

Ride the waves as I have no choice
Some days water will douse this voice
Other days may be like life before
An alternative existence to now explore

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  • 18 years ago

    by XxrejectxX

    Wow, i love this poem.
    you wrote it extremely well.
    and it flowed nicely.
    great work.
    :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda Lou

    That was a great poem. it has alot og meaning to it..excellent job!!

  • 18 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    Wow.. I'm like the rhyming of Connotation, with desperation!! Well done for that alone, without even mentioning the rest!! Spelling of 'Amongst' if you don't mind me saying, needs correcting.. However, this is very well written, and flows as it would be said, without realising there are rhymes in there. 5/5 for definite.. xx

  • 18 years ago

    by SaveMe?

    Wow i love this poem seriously!
    the words flow so well together and i love all the rhyming =]
    greatpoem!
    5/5
    keep writing and stay strong =]
    lovelove
    Alice
    xxxx

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