Awesome!! just simply awesome. i always find it hard to rhyme every other line like that; that rhyme scheme is really difficult, and you pulled it off quite nicely. i am really impressed and really proud. keep writing, this is good stuff!! ^.^ b.y.w., i liiked the biblical allusion (brave like Ruth, thats high level thinking right there). again, awesome job!! you have improved so much, its great!! ^.^