Wow this poem moved me alot i can sadly relate to nearly every word you are a aeriously amazing writer!
5/5
stay string and keep writing =]
lovelove
Alice
xxxx

The fall of the mighty family - you've portrayed it with raw emotions and a lot much pain. the last line is so true - we've just become immune to a whole load of injustice that happens.

the best i guess each of us can do is see that we will make a difference.

good luck and peace
shobhana

That's so true...Very sad. I can relate to this, too. You did extremely awesome on this poem, and are very talented! Much love!

This is really touching I completly felt the emotion and such
5/5 great work!

-Cody-

I like this poem a lot, great job ! keep it up! check out my poems too, thanx

5/5

I again really enjoyed this read, and i think this is gonna earn you a place in my favourites! :) I lovedt he menaing htis poem holds, its funny how the world seems to have changed over the past decade or so. I love the emotions you portrayed so well, they were very real. The flow was good, and the rhymes worked well and didnt seem forced. You drew my attention from the first line and you kept that attention throughtout the poem. An excellent job! Keep writing! xx

So true