ALL YOUR HURTFUL YEARS

by lana   Jul 20, 2006


Every time you think
about anything
Everyone sees you sink

You try and do things to make you free
but your hurting everyone
And that you cant see

You always make a complete mess
And then you never
second guess

Your past
Is coming back up so fast

I want to help
But you will always fear
That we don't care

But mum
Cant you see
all my tears
That drop everyday
And you have nothing to say

All you do every night
Is lay upon your bed and dream
Then wake up and scream

Let all your hurt go
And cry those tears
from all your hurtful years

mum i love you and i am here

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  • 18 years ago

    by SweetxMisery

    Aww this is good. It shows just how hard it is for some people to just let go. Thats how you get better just let the tears flow and the pain come out because its much more painful to keep it in.

    nicely done.

    -Kayla

  • 18 years ago

    by xLongxXxLostx

    Wow, this was really deep, I loved it. You wrote it beatutifully as well as with a lot of emotion. Good write. 5/5

    (and thank you for all your comments on my work!)

    - |X|Long♥Lost|X|

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Beautifully written
    Good Message
    lovely rhyme and flow
    Good job
    5/5
    ~MF~

  • 18 years ago

    by Erica Chambers

    Aww i really liked this poem! thanks for the comment ~-ericamayb~-

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess Love

    This is a beautiful poem. It shows the true essence of friendship. Keep going. And thanks for your sweet words on Heaven In Your Eyes. I really appreciate it.

    Best Wishes...
    Michelle

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