I loved this poem, i got kind of confused in certain parts..but, for the most part it was awesome!

She sits atop a thrown of power,
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I think the 'thrown' should be 'throne' maybe i'm wrong, just an opinion!

Great job 5/5

I really liked this...and this is where the poem should belong. This isn't a topic you read about everyday and it's good to finally get away from that. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Lovely imagery here -- both figurative and otherwise.

Overall a beautifully dark and mysterious poem. Nicely written.

As always~ Kate

5/5

I think this is the perfect catagory for this poem...I thought it was soo origainal and truely amazing!!!...I loved how you made Death into a woman with pale skin, red lips and wow....all those comparisons and all the qualities of the woman..its all soo perfect!!!!SOOOOO BEAUTIFUL!!!5/5..i absolutly loved it!!

I think the category this is in is fine. =)

It was a great poem too. I loved the second stanza. It stood out alot to me. There's nothing I would change either. It's great the way it is. Keep up the great work. =) 5/5

Natalie``

I really like how this is written. fantastic job.

Hey there! Wow, great poem. It was very well done. I loved the imagery and your use of vocabulary.

The only mistakes I found were:

"She sits atop a thrown of power,"

--I'm pretty sure its 'throne'.

&

"She`s a majestic beauty,"

--Just the apostrohy (sp?) is wrong. I think you meant "She's" instead of She`s.

Other then that this poem was amazing! Keep up the awesome work! Definately deserved a 5/5.

Take Care.

--Angie xoxo

That is really a very unique vision and i admire such talent a lot, very beautifully written

all the best and take care
5/5

I would keep this under the dark poetry. This was really good. You have a lot of description and the words your used really brought out a clear image. You brought colour into the pictuer 'White and Red', two colours of death. Red for blood and White for resurrection. I'm sure it was unintentional, but to me, it meant something. Good stuff.

I can't understand in my first reading, but after a few times then i've got some idea. Just found that this poem is good. But is it in the correct category?
I like some lines of the poem, awesome work. Anyway take care, keep it up!!

An excellent account on the mystic character you convey. Wonderful diction and a sense of twisted passion lurked within the poem. Very good use of effective language. I would also agree with Darien, this piece should be categorized as fantasy or horror.

Well done.

God bless,
-Elysium.

P.S: Do read some of my poetry. Please and thank you =].

This is work that you don't see every day..I mean it in a good way because this is simply amazing work! I love it!
5/5

-cody-

This poem fit exactly in this category. it decribes great and i can see images clearly.
awesome job! keep up the good work!
-5/5 steph

Very good. I love all the imagery placed in this poem. Good job. I loved the description. Very good!! Keep up the great work.

~BJ~