You're My Everything

by NoPatience   Jul 21, 2006


As Much as i don't want you to leave,
I have to say goodbye.
You're an amazing guy, and I can't believe...
How fast time really flies.
I already miss you,
and you're not even gone.
Without you, Baby,
I'm not sure if I'm strong.
Because of you,
I know who I Am.
And I'll never forget,
All this time that we've spent.
It all seems surreal,
That after this long,
We've come this far,
and soon you'll be gone.
You're my every breath.
iI breathe in each day.
You're my best friend,
i wish i could say,
All the thoughts,
Running through my head.
But I can't
so I'm writing you instead.
You're everything to me.
This comes from the heart,
of the girl who was once,
completely torn apart.
Baby, I Love You,
That Will Never Change.
Whether you are different,
or if you're still the same.

You're My Everything.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~*×FaÐ3D‡‡M€mØ®Ïê§×*~

    5/5 loved it... u r definately on my favourites now....

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    I love this poem! It is filled with so much love and care, and I can relate to this in so many ways. The last 4 lines were my favorite. Great write! 5/5 Keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    It's a nice poem. Seems very stream-of-consciousness with little flow to it, though. Your capitalization isn't consistent at all, which kind of takes away from the poem because I sat here thinking "is that word supposed to be emphasized or something?"

  • 18 years ago

    by Kylie

    Aww, that is really really nice!!
    Good work, that was a real warm and heartfelt poem! Excellent work!!!! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by ashley

    Wow. This poem is amazing. You put my feelings into words. It's a very touching poem and I don't think I'll ever forget it.

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