Comments : You're My Everything

  • 18 years ago

    by ashley

    Wow. This poem is amazing. You put my feelings into words. It's a very touching poem and I don't think I'll ever forget it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Kylie

    Aww, that is really really nice!!
    Good work, that was a real warm and heartfelt poem! Excellent work!!!! :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    It's a nice poem. Seems very stream-of-consciousness with little flow to it, though. Your capitalization isn't consistent at all, which kind of takes away from the poem because I sat here thinking "is that word supposed to be emphasized or something?"

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    I love this poem! It is filled with so much love and care, and I can relate to this in so many ways. The last 4 lines were my favorite. Great write! 5/5 Keep it up!

  • 5/5 loved it... u r definately on my favourites now....