Aww, that brings a tear to my eye! That is the sweetest poem, i love it! Keep up the good work!

Beautiful. Every girl who's ever had her heart broken wants to hear those words exactly. 5/5

Omg mark!! this poem is beautiful the girl who you wrote it for is lucky.
hope your ok!!
speak 2 ya soon
love jess xxxxx

A beautiful poem, I like your choice of words.
Keep it up
Ash

This was one of the most beautifulest poems that I have ever read. It shows that you used some deep emotion to write this. It also shows that your not a selfish person. You have painted a wonderful picture here. Keep up the excellent work. 5/5

Letty

It's cute.

This poem was precious. if i were the girl you were talking about in this poem i would date you in a heartbeat.

OMG!! I wanted to cry!! It's just so beautiful!! whoever u wrote this for is the luckiest girl in the whole world mark!! tons of people would just love to be urs! Luvs, DeadGirl