The Silhouette of a Tragedy

by AllHailTheHeartbreaker   Jul 21, 2006


I won't let them have you
they can't take you away
None of them would understand
all the reasons you have to stay.

Break all the chains
and push through the bars
Find your way out now
before tonight fades into hours.

Promise to seal your death
with the memory of me
Should they take your precious life
and with it the only thing I need.

I can't think anymore
as my emptiness fills with tears
I see them drag you away
your expression confirming my biggest fears.

I wish you'd reassure me
promise it will be alright
Make them unlock you now
tell me I can come with you tonight.

I swear I'd give up everything
just to lay with you one last time
I would let them take me, too
if I could have one more night to call you mine.

Please scream out now
say my name out loud
Whisper something to me
anything, just make a sound.

I fold into myself for comfort
its so cold without you here
Without defense I cry for you
you're so far but still so near.

(I don't really know what this is supposed to be about, so come to your own decisions and let me know. I think its figurative, but I was inspired to write something 'different' and this was what happened.)

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  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Pretty good poem. Great flow.

  • 18 years ago

    by SuDDeNly TRaGic

    Wow! i really like it, it IS different, well done

    j

  • 18 years ago

    by donk2ymouth

    I like this poem, it made me really think about the topic meant to me, because you didn't exactly state what it was about. That is what I like in poems.

    The flow and format of this poem is great and I also noticed you used an
    A
    B
    C
    B
    Rhyme scheme, that was interesting..Good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by ShatteredGirl

    Yeh it was different but i liked it alot. i found it really interesting n good flow. great. good work.

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