Yeh it was different but i liked it alot. i found it really interesting n good flow. great. good work.

I like this poem, it made me really think about the topic meant to me, because you didn't exactly state what it was about. That is what I like in poems.

The flow and format of this poem is great and I also noticed you used an
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Rhyme scheme, that was interesting..Good work.

Wow! i really like it, it IS different, well done

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Pretty good poem. Great flow.