I think we all experience the pain of a broken heart at some point in our lives. I wrote this poem because at this time in my life this is what I'm going through. Hopefully some of you that can relate will find this poem worth reading.

Amazing. and the lines i could relate to the most were these...

You said you didn't want to hurt me
but how could that be?
I tried making excuses for the way you treated me
but now I clearly see
I held on for too long and it wasn't real
and it'll take time for my heart to heal

really good rhyme scheme.... and so much emotion just flowed into my head as i was reading it. 5/5
Paulette