The Closed Door

by FaceDownInTheDirt [Eden]   Jul 21, 2006


Ive liked u for a wile
after seeing u and that smile
you send chills up my spine
and i wanna make u mine
and trust me baby i ain\'t lyin

i want u real bad
but babe i ain\'t getting mad
i Will wait for u forever
and leave Ur side Never

one day we started talkin
wile we were slowly walkin
it was hard 4 u to say
but u said it n e way
u finally asked me out
and i was without a doubt
that are future would last forever
and we would break up Never

so i screamed out a yes
and u put me in a caress
then u gave me a kiss
that i will always miss

after that i went home
to find myself alone
so i wrote down sum stuff
so babe don\'t call my bluff
cuz im serious about you
cuz u know i love u
so heres what i wrote
its like a lil love note:
i Love you,
now u no that
heartbreak,
i wont go thru that
4ever,
is us defined
our love,
wont Ever slip my mind

so a couple of months have gone bye
and i just discovered one big lie
you aren\'t feeling me
they way I\'m feeling you
now u have no clue
What Ur putting me thru

Ur putting me thru so much pain
and I\'m the one left with nothing to gain
now i feel used
and mentally abused
I\'m no longer obsessed
its more like depressed

now I\'m scarred to Love again
cuz me n u r no longer friends
since Ur Love deceived me
and i thought u believed me
when i said i loved u
cuz in my heart it was true

man,
Now u really have no idea
What Ur putting my thru
so i wrote down a Lil something
about What i think of u
so this is what i wrote
its like a Lil heartbroken note:
i Love u,
i thought u new that
heartbreak.
I\'m going thru that
4ever,
was our definition
our love,
was put thru demolition

So now i hope u see
how much u mean to me
so i hope Ur happy
cuz our love was crappy

so now our love is NO-MORE
and the only thing in front of you is
THE CLOSED DOOR.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Very, very good poem. keep up the good work.5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Christie

    This is a long but touching poem. u write well for an 11 yr old.
    keep writing, u have such potential,
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Alex Laham

    Nice man, you've definitely got some talent. Keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    Awwwe Edie -hugs- puuurtyful poem! =]
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Megan

    Wow you are really really good for an eleven year old! keep it up hun!
    meg

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