I liked your poem
Nice conecpt it makes you think you know
The closed door-- nice

I love itt

Love this poem its just wat i was lookin 4 lol except only the 1st few verses!!

Wow i really like this its kool

Wow you are really really good for an eleven year old! keep it up hun!
meg

Awwwe Edie -hugs- puuurtyful poem! =]
5/5

Nice man, you've definitely got some talent. Keep it up.

This is a long but touching poem. u write well for an 11 yr old.
keep writing, u have such potential,
xxx

Very, very good poem. keep up the good work.5/5