That was so sad...good poem though.

Wow dude great job this poem deserve 6 not five lols i can relate to this one too a true love it is lols

great piece

geneross

I loved this poem. Its was well written I gave i a 5/5 thanks for the comments

Man I hate when that happens. The girl you love is taken by some lucky guy. 5/5
-Vino

I no that my comment wont stand out due to the fact tha everyone knows and believes your poems for every word they say. They are beautiful. I love them all!
I especially loved this poem because I felt the same way. I wish i knew how to express myself and write as well as you do. I am in love with your poems! They are really good. If that poem was true, I believe the girl is happy.
well done 5/5

Thank you BeLLA for this comment, yes it is true but it did not effect the girl at all, she just didnt care,lol.

thank you again.

I loved it. It has emotion that you can practically feel. 5/5
And thank you for commenting on my poem.

Thank you sabat for taking time and comment on this, it means alot.

I am truly amazed at your work.
It stands out.
It is amazingly written.
Not only does it rhyme but it makes sense. Yeah, I know not all poems have to rhyme. I am sure that even if your poems didn't rhyme they would be just as good. Keep up the brilliant work =) Emma, 5/5 xxx

It a great poem. its sad but sweet at teh same time. good job. 5/5

Your very good at this i know how you feel and i dont vote on poems i dont like

Meep. Forgot to leave a comment on this one.

I love this one it is amazing, and it ties in very well with part two. I think both are amazngly well written and each one had an amazing flow and rhytym it kept me intrested for both. Great Write.

Amazing !! reminds me of an old relationship I had!? Kinda sad...huh?great job!

Awwh, i thought this poem was really cute.

The first line I was like wtf is this...then as I continued to read it I could sense the emotion put into it good job5/5

Woah that's awesome! I really like it and even though i'm a girl i can still relate to that poem very easily that's awesome!!

Awww this is reallyy sad, but its also really good! wow what an amazing job. i like it a lot =] 5/5

This is so sad...but sweet
beautifully written
good job

I was left speechless when i finished it. i can relate so well, though you handelled it better then me. sometimes your flow was a bit patchy, but this did not take away from the poem. well done

Shadow dancer

Hey now that was really good..
butta what wats so special about that girl..
it needs just alittle more discriptive
butta it was awsome..