Comments : The Luckiest Guy

  • 17 years ago

    by Cherise

    Wow, i realy can relate to this one, froma girls perspective that is :p It's a crappy feeling and it makes one have so many thoughts and emotions, and you seem to have captured that perfectly in the poem, i really enjoyed reading it

    great job :)

  • 17 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    That was so beautiful. Made me drop a tear :(
    Great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Omg this was such a good poem emotion flowed through each word just as it should this is a great piece of work

  • 17 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Omg this was such a good poem emotion flowed through each word just as it should this is a great piece of work

  • 17 years ago

    by Nicole

    Aww this is so sweet i love it! you're a really great writter! keep it up...and also thank you for your comment i really appreciate it!

  • 17 years ago

    by barbara

    Awww...how sad and beautiful and...wow!!! this is a really great poem!!! love it!!! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Hopeless Romantic

    I like this one. And I can very much relate. Though I dont like talking about an ex. great poem though! xxx
    Mike

  • 17 years ago

    by Riley

    It was very nice, and well written.
    Although stanza 4,5, and 7 were a bit shaky in terms with the rhyming, the general flow of the poem was very good. Your ideas were well spread out and it is a very beautiful poem. And I like how you use proper grammar. I don't know why, but netspeak in poems bugs the hell out of me lol.

  • 17 years ago

    by Love Fallacy

    I really liked this piece. Really conveyed emotion . Keep up the good work. If you could, check out some of my work. I think you would really like it. Thank you and nice job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Emily E Mehigan

    Sucks that you hurt like this. I like the flow of your poems.<3

  • 17 years ago

    by Kenny

    Great piece you have there. Amazing! Keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by rachel

    Wow. i loved it, good work :)

  • 16 years ago

    by girly

    Amazing writer. absolutely amazing.

  • 15 years ago

    by Captivat3d

    Sad poem but it was very well written. I really liked your word choice and I can really understand/relate to this poem. Great job!

  • 15 years ago

    by bOlly danCer

    Really missed reading your poems..
    soo much pain...

    take care

  • 14 years ago

    by IML

    Your like a Guru at Poetry. I wish I had good writings like this. Even out of the 93 ive written haha over a 4 year progress of trying to get better at it.

    Good poem, i like this.
    ian