Hi
thank lorita for your comment i do really appreciate it..
i also read your poem and i like this one it's too goodand fabuluous.
i like to keep in touch because my english sin't my mother language so i need some support..
silent_wind06@hotmail.com

Oh wow, that has left me reeling. I love synchopation, and when I first saw the poem, I saw all the 'I wish's', and knew I would like the rhythm, and then I read it all, and WOW is what is left. You are amazing. Well done. 5/5. xx