Doesn't seem to follow a consistent pattern or rhyming scheme. I really like it though.

Doesn't seem to follow a consistent pattern or rhyming scheme. I really like it though.

Waaaaaaaaw
like always a great poem again
ur so good
i like all of your poems, 5/5

Again, the rhyming pattern is off, and it dents this poem a little as I feel it would do better with more of a flow. However, the poem is still beautiful, and obviously your friendship is too :)

Peace. [Sole]

Another emotive piece. You have a great talent for making me cry lol.
You're expressionism is great. Keep it flowing.