My soul burns

by Drew   Jul 21, 2006


My soul burns with an endless flame, for my one true love that has gone away. I never strayed but still i pray for my endless pain to go away

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  • 17 years ago

    by LovelyDivine

    Hey. that was great. its short and sweet, but has an AWESOME meaning. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by this is only the beggining

    This is good it has a deep meaning but in not so many words i like that.if you could comment my poems.it would mean alot to me.thanks.

    -Ashley

  • 17 years ago

    by Hurtingsoul

    U know i love the way that you can say so little and yet have such a great impast
    beautiful
    Take care
    xxHSxx

  • Hey, well maybe that "love"that went away wasn't really your love and it was just an obssession. Trust me, if they went away and were your true love they'll come back.If they don't come back, sooner or later, you'll find your true love. Beleive me. And thanks i hope everything gets better for me too because i really love him

    Diana
    XOXO

  • 18 years ago

    by amber

    Heya... I luv this... its short but awesome...

    it has soo much feeling to it even though it is short...

    all in all --- GREAT 5/5