Did You Ever?

by modern day barbie   Jul 21, 2006


Did u ever know a boy that changed your world, just by him looking your way
&& every time you would talk to him, you'd choke up and not know what to say?

did u ever know a boy that you just fell completely in love with
&& he has no feelings toward you, just a lil less than friendship

did u even know a boy that you would give anything and everything to
&& he just looks at you like your invisible, just right through you

did you ever have to give up on the only person that makes you smile, just by hearing his name
...because you knew deep down inside that he was just playing the game

if you have.. vote a 5

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kris

    LOVE IT!!
    Been through it many many years ago.

  • 17 years ago

    by SaraH_*

    Im in love for ur poems

  • 18 years ago

    by Zach Buenger

    Very nice... unfortunetly i'm a guy, and you prob don't care, but i still know what your going through

  • 18 years ago

    by Sempiternal

    This is a good piece of emotion written by you...I enjoyed reading it..thank you for that...So you deserve to know that which I'm sure you do...

    With that being complimented...

    OPINION ONLY...
    "I "FEEL" that you could have gone deeper than the outer coating of what you "FELT" then "WROTE" here..."

    So...what is really beneath it all that you expressed..? Find it in yourself and let it flow without reason or cause...

    Coolio?

    If you are unable to find it...it would be best to try harder until you do get it..because it's so there...

    Peace out..

    Kevin