How does one move on

by lawrence   Mar 1, 2004


How does one move on
With the passing of a love
A plunge into eternal hell
From paradise above

How do you pick up the pieces
Shattered of the heart
Fragments of passion cutting from within
Whole, yet torn apart

How do you look at clouds
Dreams of what could be
Fluff of an angel's soft caress
Now gargolye's all I see

But I will move on
Blessed to have loved
Pick up the little pieces
Dream from the clouds above

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  • 20 years ago

    by Brittany

    Hey thanx for commenting on my poem, I looked up your poem and found this one and just recently having my heart broken, this one really speaks to me, what a beautiful poem.... Feel free to email me. britlarcombe@yahoo.com.au anytime you want to chat. Keeo writing I want to read more!

  • 20 years ago

    by craig

    hi L. great poem you have here. you describe what it feels like to loose a true love, a companion of the heart, with such cutting descriptions. love the line `fragments of passion cutting from within` WOW thats brilliant. Fragments, those little momments together passing through your lonely mind `cutting from within` ive been there many a time. your poem brings back a lot of unwanted feelings and memorys which shows how good it is. and i like the optomistic ending even though it sounds like your heart dosent mean those words. Excellent poem. thanx for the kind words you said about my poem L. Iv known a few suicidal people in the past and thats where the idea came from, also an overactive! imagination helps(lol) thanx again for youre words. your comments are always welcome. 5outof5 topmarks!!!

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