hi L. great poem you have here. you describe what it feels like to loose a true love, a companion of the heart, with such cutting descriptions. love the line `fragments of passion cutting from within` WOW thats brilliant. Fragments, those little momments together passing through your lonely mind `cutting from within` ive been there many a time. your poem brings back a lot of unwanted feelings and memorys which shows how good it is. and i like the optomistic ending even though it sounds like your heart dosent mean those words. Excellent poem. thanx for the kind words you said about my poem L. Iv known a few suicidal people in the past and thats where the idea came from, also an overactive! imagination helps(lol) thanx again for youre words. your comments are always welcome. 5outof5 topmarks!!!

Hey thanx for commenting on my poem, I looked up your poem and found this one and just recently having my heart broken, this one really speaks to me, what a beautiful poem.... Feel free to email me. britlarcombe@yahoo.com.au anytime you want to chat. Keeo writing I want to read more!