Fighting

by Shelly   Jul 21, 2006


Bein kept awake 4 all the late nites
Hearing & seeing all the intense fights.
Feeling the build up of emotion and tears,
along with all the pain and fears.

Seeing the hurt & angar in ur eyes,
hearing all the stories and lies.
Trying so hard to stay strong,
but everythings just goin wrong.

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  • 18 years ago

    by .:*Br!tt@ny*:.

    I like this poem...what else can I say about it

  • 18 years ago

    by lonelynow

    I know how you feel. Brilliant work, keep it up! xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    I mean in the last line...lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    I like this poem. The rhyming was really good. The flow is a little off though and you spelt everything wrong in the last night...but despite those bad points it's a really good poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Hmm. There's nothing really wrong to me besides spelling but that's out of the question right now. NIce flow. Same amount of syllibles for the most part. 5/5
    -Kakashi

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