Hmm. There's nothing really wrong to me besides spelling but that's out of the question right now. NIce flow. Same amount of syllibles for the most part. 5/5
-Kakashi

I like this poem. The rhyming was really good. The flow is a little off though and you spelt everything wrong in the last night...but despite those bad points it's a really good poem.

I mean in the last line...lol

I know how you feel. Brilliant work, keep it up! xxxx

I like this poem...what else can I say about it